I like it a lot and would totally read it to my kids.

If I were to make suggestions, it’d be to maybe extend that grassy definition almost to the kids shoulders and put two more chickens in that area, one on either side. Maybe have one be a different color.

I like the font colors and styling - the “kidsteaders presents” is cool because it suggests more books to come.

Good stuff!

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I agree with him. Font styling is great, but a deeper background of the grass would be a nice touch.

Thanks for the input, I'll work on revisions