How about this one? 
Same questions as OP
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Looks good ; only adjustment I’d recommend would be a bit happier, more smile on child’s face 😄
What is the book about is the “If” important to the subject/ topic it “If you want to…” or is it “So You want to…” or was the standard “So you want to raise chickens” avoided for some reason.
Based on the title and cover I’m hoping it’s a children’s book that basically covers everything anyone (adult or child) would need to know about raising chickens explained at a child level and illustrated.
Yep, it's spun off of "If You Give a Mouse a Cookie." I'm going for a fun story of escalating if-thens that go over some basic husbandry in a silly way. There's also 5 recipes because I think that's a fun way for kids to make connections (this is where food comes from) and gain some "hard skills" with parental guidance.
Sounds good I’ll be interested when it’s ready.
make the eggs egg shaped and a lil more red or white so it doesn't look loke she's holding a couple dookies, and bring her hand away from the title as it's cluttered
other than that, looks SUPER🙌🙌🙌🙌
Haha, will do
The bigger text, more grass and chickens are good improvements
Agree with someone who wrote that it would be nice if the child looked happier!
Also - I didn't follow the earlier feedback so maybe this has been covered, but every time I see the cover in my feed I think the child is holding large beans. Took me starting at it for a while to realize that the thumb was covering an egg shape. (Obviously eggs make more sense than beans, but I just didn't see them at first. Not sure if I'm just weird that way...)
Beans are better than poo 😂
I'll fix them when I get some downtime
I got some time on my lunch break to bang out a few modifications, I think I've caught up on input. What say ye about this iteration? 
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Bigger text is better!
I like the orange text.
Too exuberant about chickens? Is that even a thing? 😁 I don't believe it is.