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deep down she knows, but she's too into her BS to be allowed to see the truth

Replying to Avatar Lyn Alden

One of the interesting challenges and learning opportunities I’ve come across in dabbling with fiction is the process of merging narrator/author voice with character voice.

Both as a reader and writer, close third-person limited is my favorite point of view method (as opposed to first person or third person omniscient) for most stories. This means the narrator only knows what the point-of-view character knows, even though it’s written in third person.

But interestingly, when done closely, it also means the narration itself is colored by the character’s personality. Rather than just come across the page in dialog or in italicized literal thoughts, the rest of the narration is also basically an indirect extension of their thoughts.

And so for example if a character is cynical and curses a lot, then in addition to the dialogue reflecting that, the narration also reflects that. It comes across more cynical and will curse at times. “What a shit day. Bob pulled out of his driveway and…” In contrast, if a character is upbeat and polite, the narration will feel similar.

And there’s no right answer on how much to let character voice color the dialogue in third person limited, because an author can choose how close to get to the character. And readers have preferences for their favorite points of view. I like a bit of everything but like close third person limited the majority of the time.

Distant third person limited has a rather consistent and detached narrator voice, despite still being limited to what the character knows. Very close third person is almost like first person, meaning the narration is basically just like that character, except all the “I/me” words are replaced with “he/she” and so forth.

As a reader, a lot of this is often invisible. As a writer though, it’s interesting to 1) pick how close you want third person limited to be for your given book, and 2) be consistent with it so you don’t unintentionally zoom in or out at certain times.

So it’s kind of a mindfuck because there are multiple layers to be aware of. A really interesting process to tackle.

one of the best third person "narrators" i've read come from the visual novel "Disco Elysium" where the narrators are the emotions of the protagonist, using a third person to refer to his actions while being characters at the same time and sometime talking to the protagonist who is really fuck up on drugs and internal mental problems xD

not using chrome, or you can use a system wide IP blocker like PortMaster, it's not as convenient as having it in the browser itself, but it allows you to block any content you don't want

let's hope so, it seems so far that he's willing to fight the entrenched bastard rotting the core of government.

That might be turning point for the US to prevent it's downfall

The Russian government is an invader, Putin a dictator, Zelenski a fool and ppl are dying.

I hate Musk, but i think his doing right with DOGE so far

I don't trust Trump, he will say a lot of BS, let's wait and see what he ACTUALLY does, not what he says.

Matt? has the UK government just fucked up all user world wide with a back door to their E2EE iCloud ?

https://youtu.be/WIA46Xh7kR8

i like brave and mozilla, but might change mozilla due to current actions by them

but what can you do when you are forced to take the bullet like it seems the UK government just did to ALL apple users WORLD WIDE

https://youtu.be/WIA46Xh7kR8

If this is true the UK has just endangered all citizens of all countries that use Apple

holly, great work with both teams Peter, hope it recieves more support from the general public.

each time i talk about Real bedford online outside nostr i get rekt by haters XD

UK is doing some really fuck up things

Requesting Apple access to data from ALL user world wide

WTF

https://youtu.be/WIA46Xh7kR8

for far they have exploited zoom's screen share or using a fake calendar app to fool ppl into giving control over your twitter

gonna make it woke BS or the funniest shit in a long time, there's no middle ground

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the worst is when you are going to do something, then someone ask you "Hey can you do X?" and you are like "Sure" then once you finish X you forgot about the other thing you were going to do and keep going with your life till someone reminds you about it

I was at Milei's presidential opening. A lot of ppl where there, when Zelensky gave him a hug and was presented as "The greatest protector of freedom in the West" and a high percentage of the crow started chanting his name.

Now the same guys are calling him a dictator, fool, traitor, etc.

both wings are full of really stupid NPCs